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Team work makes the dream work? I’m not sure.
In this article “Team work makes the dream work? I’m not sure”, Shannon emphasizes that
no everyone likes to being in a team. She also mentions the main issues of being in a team.
I have learned that teamwork helps us a lot as professionals. Since I’m studying for my
degree I have to work in teams, at the beginning I didn’t like it, now I do. All my experiences
in teams are good. My teammates likes to hear others ideas. And we try to include them in
the final job. I’m very uneasy about my English, that is something that I still don’t like it. My
teammates always makes me feel good, and they help me with my nerves. I have learned to
work in teams. Put the best of you, not only for you. For your team.
Corrected Version. (Grammarly suggestions)
In the article “Does teamwork make the dream work? I’m not so sure.” Shannon
emphasizes that not everyone enjoys being part of a team. She also highlights the main
challenges of working in a team. Personally, I have learned that teamwork helps us a lot as
professionals. Since I’m studying for my degree, I often have to work in teams. At first, I
didn’t like it, but now I do. All my experiences in teams have been positive. My teammates
like to hear everyone’s ideas. And we try to incorporate them into the final project.
I’m still uneasy about my English, which is something I continue to struggle with. However,
my teammates always make me feel supported, and they help ease my nerves. I’ve learned
to work better in teams. You need to give your best, not just for yourself, but for the team.
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