Describing

 My version.

1. My friend Alo is a listener. She likes to listen to others. She is a nice person, and she likes

to speak when she feels it’s necessary. She is an intelligent girl. She also likes to help

others. She analyzes the situation, and she’ll be there for you.

2. Eder is one of my my best friends. He is so funny and he likes to jokes. Me and Eder we

share the same humor, so we are kinda the same. He makes laugh to everyone around

him.

3. Jolette is like the second teacher or my English class. Her English is amazing. I need to

say that she is the best in my classroom. Whenever I need help I ask her for help. She has

helped me a lot.

4. I consider Isa as the orginzer. If we have a date or something it’s because of her. She likes

to go out, even if her parents don’t lot her to stay for too long

5. My best friend, Melissa. I love her more than anything. She’s my long-term. She knows

everything about me. Even if she’s not in the same school anymore. We still considering

best friends

Corrected Version. (Grammarly suggestions)

1. My friend Alo is a good listener. She enjoys listening to others. She is a kind person

and only speaks when she feels it’s necessary. She is intelligent and likes helping

others. She analyzes situations and will always be there for you.

2. Eder is one of my best friends. He is really funny and loves to joke around. Eder and I

share the same sense of humor, so we’re quite similar. He makes everyone around

him laugh.

3. Jolette is like the second teacher in my English class. Her English is amazing, and I

have to say. She’s the best in the class. Whenever I need help, I ask her, and she’s

helped me a lot.

4. I consider Isa the organizer. If we have plans or events, it’s usually because of her.

She loves going out, even though her parents don’t always let her stay out for too

long.

5. My best friend, Melissa, means the world to me. I love her more than anything. She’s

my long-time friend and knows everything about me. Even though she’s not at the

same school anymore, we still consider each other best friends.